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Part #13 - Oh, The Webs We Weave.
InsanelySane                   (User #8759) N/A 05/31/2010 09:18:49pm

I loveddd it !
Update ?

Part #4 - Hang Your Head
Dezzy                   (User #6892) N/A 04/20/2010 09:46:28pm

Zaydee IS me. That stuff always happens to me. Excellent job, I'm gonna read more!

Part #13 - Oh, The Webs We Weave.
Kylie                   (User #8229) N/A 04/08/2010 04:17:41am

Poor Patrick and Zaydee, they can't understand each other let alone themselves.
Can't wait for the next update!

Part #12 - Situations
Kylie                   (User #8229) N/A 04/08/2010 04:00:46am

Yay! and I think my favorite part was where Patrick told Pete that he had chucked his phone in the pool 'cause people are always telling me that I'm a terrible liar and then I just think 'If you only knew...' haha

Lanii                   (User #8466) N/A 03/30/2010 04:16:31pm

OHMIGAWD!!! THAT ROCKED WOOOOOOHHHH!!! PATRICK FINNALLY MAKING A DAMN MOVE YAYYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!! xx

Part #11 - Get Up, Shut Up.
Lanii                   (User #8466) N/A 03/27/2010 09:04:34pm

AMAZING!!!YOUR STORY ROCKZ LIKE WOW!!! YAY MORE PLEASE!!!!

Kylie                   (User #8229) N/A 03/22/2010 11:24:37pm

Wow I just found this little treasure of a story and I love it! I can't wait for you to update. When you said that David reminded Zaydee of Patrick but she couldn't figure out why I knew that David had to be related to Patrick. I hope when he saw them kissing he realized that Zaydee is AMAZING! How could Patrick be so stupid to take Cindee into Zaydee's room? If it was anyone else it would've just been awkward to ask them to leave, but instead it broke her heart. By the way, I love the name Zaydee!

Part #9 - The (After) Life Of The Party
Gothicscorpion                   (User #5909) N/A 06/07/2008 04:57:27am

:D Weed Buddies! Joe amuses me so.I smell a plot twist.New characters always equals a plot twist! I've read all the chapters so far,I was just to lazy to review earlier :P

emily                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 05/23/2008 11:31:09pm

i just read the whole thing! really like it.
patrick is being a total ass D:
but i really like it so please continue


anouther update maybe?

Whatsername                   (User #5059) N/A 05/21/2008 04:14:09pm

good chapter :]

i really think this whole problem between Patrick and Zaydee needs to get resolved.
or Zaydee needs to get to know this new guy :P

update soon?

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