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Zilian                   (User #8026) N/A 10/14/2009 06:59:49pm

omg. i love :3
it was sooo sweeetttt!

XShakeItAtTheDiscoX                   (User #5919) N/A 06/15/2008 01:21:46pm

“Brendon Urie, can I have your autograph? And your children?”
“Pete, get the fuck off me, you douchebag!”
“Come on, just one baby! You don't have STDs, do you? Because that might make the night just too exciting for me.”
ahahaaha. that would definitely be me.

“It's starting to get cold, so what do you say we go home and watch old episodes of The O.C.? I didn't want to tell you, but Jon sent me the fourth season last week.”
“I can't believe you've been holding out on me, Ross!”
“Yeah, yeah, you'll get over it.”
idk why i thought that was super hilarious.
i love their relationship. :]

this story was adorable.

midnight_moonlight                   (User #4373) N/A 07/06/2007 02:50:39pm

cutest oneshot EVER.

i love how in the beggining Ryan's all protective of his "territory" in a way.

you're an amazing jealous =D

keep em coming.

RY-SPOON lover                   (User #3309) N/A 07/05/2007 12:27:54pm

"Everyone always liked Ryan because he was quiet. But everyone, including Ryan, would grow to love Brendon because he was simply the opposite."


Most beautiful friggin' line ever. Wow.


“This band is all I have.”


Sad yet amazing.


“You can't screw this up for us. I want to put all my faith in you, I'm just…”

Brendon gave a small smile and played the last few notes, singing for only Ryan to hear and putting the boy's fears at ease.

“Believe in me as I believe in you, tonight.”


Gorgeous. Simply gorgeous.


The whole scene with Ryan waking up and knowing his dad was dead before anyone told him is so beautiful, because it's so true. When things like that happen, you just KNOW.

It's happened to me a couple times, so I know the feeling.

It's just amazing and tragic. And I loved how Brendon watched the bathroom door for 28 minutes when Ryan went in.


“The worst part is, it won't go away. I've tried everything, smelling the food my mom made, the flowers on his casket. It all reeks of him. He won't leave me alone, Brendon, and I don't know what to do to make him stop.”


That line was...holy crap wow. Wonderful. And the part after with Brendon's cologne taking away the alcohol smell was phenomenal.


“Brendon Urie, can I have your autograph? And your children?”

“Pete, get the fuck off me, you douchebag!”




“Yeah, those gold records look amazing in our hallway."


That little joke made me LOL in such a gorgeous moment. xDD


I loved how you went through the whole Panic! saga and then had it end like that on an autumn day when the band ended.

To me, that was the absolutele perfect ending; and, autumn is a quiet, thoughtful, gorgeous season, a perfect fit for Ryan's personality.


In short, I can safetly say, this was the most beautiful, breathaking oneshot I've ever read.

Thank you.

Thank you.

Brinka-xo                   (User #3061) N/A 07/04/2007 08:24:18pm

that was really cute :)
but why did the band end :O

Anna                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 07/04/2007 02:47:08am

This was so cute.

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