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Part #2 - Life Is Perfect Until At Some Point, A Bus Hits You Head On... She Was That Bus.
Olivia                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 06/21/2007 05:11:05pm

This was very bad. Sorry, but was this your first fanfiction because if it is; you need a lot of work. First off, its very unrealistic. Gerard would never go up to a random girl and just start talking to her. And second, the sexual gestures to Frank didn't make any sense.

Just quit while your ahead cause your not going to make it a decent fanfic starting off like this.

Just some construtive critism. No offense to you as a person.

xXmerci_pour_le_veninXx                   (User #2070) N/A 05/01/2007 09:55:54pm

aww, i like it. update soon!


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