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Part #2 - Thou Shalt Not Kill
Arena                   (User #6018) N/A 07/15/2008 12:20:50pm

Let me first say that I love the concept you have going here, it kept me on the edge of my seat and now I really am ready for more. My only problem was with some of the grammar and phrasing, it wasn't that bad, just something to think about as you continue the story. Please up date soon.

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