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Part #2 - Death
harajukuosaka                   (User #5053) N/A 11/18/2007 11:34:43am

wow that was pretty deep. i'm really impressed by your writing. but a way you could've made it more believable is if you showed remorse in the guys and how also, Ellie got stabbed and why Joe did it. otherwise, it was awesome, keep working on it!

Evil Doctor™                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 03/26/2007 05:52:34pm

It was pretty good, but I think you should be a bit more descriptive, and maybe add a bit more suspension to make the mood more obvious. Like when Ellie died, you should have hung onto their dispair and shock when finding her dead.
Also, tell us a little bit more about Ellie, like who is she, blah blah.
Well written, though. I'll be checking in for the new chapter.

Matthew Block                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 02/13/2007 12:02:54pm

Hayley another well written piece using members of linkin park i look forward to reading some more

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