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Arashi                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 06/09/2008 06:49:25pm

i really liked this's actually my fave one-shot so far, and i was wondering if you could do another one like this, except maybe a story not an one-shot and the OC can use Alchemy =^-^=

Jarakai                   (User #3723) N/A 03/16/2007 12:52:31pm

You wrote this really well. You did get Envy right, which would be hard since the show/manga didn't give you very much to work with. Great Job.

Goddess.Boi.Frigg                   (User #3211) N/A 12/12/2006 07:13:23am

Chii just adores your work now ^^ Chii can see why Sempai Mouse had it on her favs. Chii wants to read lots and lots and lots more by you!

koi_mouse                   (User #2619) N/A 08/05/2006 12:23:00pm

me:awwwwww Mouretsu is blushing hehe i loved it!!!!
van: you love anythign that has lust and sex and romance in it ....
me:- blushes lightly -......-__-' yeah your right >>; i guess the exsplance you i love miroku so much cause he's just the cutest perv ^^; any who! i loved it it was the best full metal fic i have read so far !!! - glumps Mouretsu- you just the cutest when u blush!
van: >.> mouse ... u better let go of him b4 tom comes by you know how he gets ..
me: nodds n reluncently lets go - well ok its great keep up the good stories ^___^- nuges van-
van : -sighs blushing and pulls out a red rose giveing it to the authress- yeah ...umm .. this is for you ... its umm .. uh .. to show ...its a gift ...
me: chuckles lightly - he's trying to say great stories and that you plots surpass even mine we both admier you and your ideas! >> he sames to have develuped a crush - gigles - awwww thats new i never seenmr. i'm all tough and emotionless blush b4 or act like this hmm ^_____^ well back to reading ! - drags van away b4 he loses himself -

Abendstern                   (User #1450) N/A 07/28/2006 01:57:25pm

Yay!! that was a cute love story.. kinda.. with twist.. ^^ really really good. I'm sorry.. i just dont seem to have a way with words..
YOur story was absoluty sc-rum-chu-less-ount.
-Pineapple's reviews are really fun. lol. they make meh laugh.

Pineapple                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 07/20/2006 11:10:57pm

Okay I have sadly not read this story yet... But I emailed it to myself so I can read it on my cell phone later on tonite cause sadly my comp time is limited (life is so cruel)! ...Wait did that make sense...oh well! ^^ But I must say... I lovers your stories to death! I sadly am lacking in the area of read and review and there are also numerous other reasons but we won't go there right now. Any who keep up the great job! ^^ People really should bestow kind worded reviews to you more often. I see way too many stories that are total crap get way more "your the best" responses! TT I mean come on people! Your writing is really good! (mine is so crap compared to yours -cries-) Gah! I'm rambling! So good luck and -who ever you worship or praise- speed!

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