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D                   (User #2665) N/A 09/09/2006 08:45:26pm

i love what u got going here. it could go lots of places! i hope u update soon!

Part #2 - One
Take_me_away510                   (User #1493) N/A 05/25/2006 03:17:15pm

I like, I like. Just one thing, you've gotta space it out more. Like this (and this is just an example, it's not from anything specific)

"No, that's my banana!" David squealed, jumping for the yellow fruit.

"What are you talking about?! It is so mine!" She yelled back.

Does that make sense? lol Update soon!

KaznagaN                   (User #1656) N/A 05/24/2006 06:16:46pm

wheres this going - mmmmmmmmmm many ideas are running through my head where this might go - but i'm gonna sit back and wait to see what you have planned!


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